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#1 Matheiu13

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 05:37 AM

I have a Biology Essay to do about "Maintaining a healthy body"
And I'm horrible with Introductions.

Can anyone help me? Tips or hints?

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 05:53 AM

Hnn.. I don't really know about healthy body keeping. Only the basics.

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 07:57 AM

In school type essays your introduction needs some type of hook. Some shocking statistic about how many people have unhealthy bodys, a famous quote about keeping a healthy body, etc.

After your hook you generally want a small lead in to each one of your points. (a very short description of what each paragraph is going to contain, try not to be repetitive with the wording)

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 10:36 AM

In school type essays your introduction needs some type of hook. Some shocking statistic about how many people have unhealthy bodys, a famous quote about keeping a healthy body, etc.

After your hook you generally want a small lead in to each one of your points. (a very short description of what each paragraph is going to contain, try not to be repetitive with the wording)

basically, this. you want to lure your readers into wanting to read further. also try to keep your points very concise. they're just there to summarize what you will be going over in later paragraphs, so they do not need to be paragraphs themselves.

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 11:04 AM

This is about all I got.



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Posted 21 September 2012 - 12:19 PM

My advice is to follow Emosaurs' advice.

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 02:13 PM

My advice is to follow Gol's advice about Emo's advice.
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Posted 21 September 2012 - 02:23 PM

My advice is to never trust Spleen, gol or myself.

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 02:25 PM

Everyone should always trust me. >.>
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Posted 21 September 2012 - 04:40 PM

Everyone should always trust me. >.>

I rectum that isn't a good idea.

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 05:07 PM

Is too. :P
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Posted 21 September 2012 - 06:18 PM

Pfff.







Rectum.

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Posted 21 September 2012 - 06:19 PM

Pfff.







Rectum.


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