This is just the introduction. Have about a chapter done. Just interested in any feedback. Nothing too interesting.
Minus The Zombies
I have finally come to the realization that the factions roaming the Earths crust are doing so in strife, because now they rule the lands. These factions formed as organically as anything I have ever seen. Be it the blood lust of many heavy-hearted individuals, or be it the able bodied father of a family with no other way to obtain food, water, and just a place to stay. Most of those families are dead now, though. They fell victim to the pure evil they had surrounded themselves with. But regardless of who is still an inhabitant to these micro societies, they can not continue to pose any threat to how history will be written.
"And I pray to God that one day, He will grant me the power to reach out and hold my hand over your head and give you instant belief, 'cause you don't have instant belief. You've been hooked, you've been crooked, you've been lied to so many times, that you're suspicious-minded. And when the right thing comes along, you don't believe in it. When I'm coming in knocking on the front door, you're out the back door looking for four leaf clovers. And when you find it, you think somebody planted it there to fool you. 'Whats the angle?' You look for an excuse. In this modern day and age we have instant coffee and instant tea--instant disbelief. That's the reason we will never become anything--it is because we will never believe in ourselves. We will always listen to the mass majority. If everybody’s making fun of you and criticizing you, then you know you're on the right track. Cause most people ain't got it."
And as that quote embedded itself inside of my mind, we felt the land shake as I looked to my friend and his dwindling hope. It's been happening for years now, and we know that someone is going to pull that trigger. The fear I feel is slowly passing as I come to terms in what I believe to be my true standing in the whole of this civilization. I am the justification for the human race.
Some concept art (dialogue is not accurate, just filler):
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